FE 4...

[starvinbohemian]

Hurrah! Chapter Four of Forgivable Expectations has been completed and posted! :D

I'm linking back to the first chapter, because the fourth chapter isn't showing up on my screen, yet.

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1275149/1/

I'm so exhausted. It isn't as long as chapter three, but it's still 32 pages long. I haven't left my computer for two days straight. I also went back and fixed the first three chapters. The boldness of the font was bothering me, and Voltaire quotes needed to be added. Plus, I had to change a few things here and there for consistency.

I owe a huge thanks to the musical artists Everclear and Rilo Kiley for keeping me awake and alert through the past two days. Also, to Xena, because her war call helped, too. ;)

Now, read and review, damn you! ;D

*Drops into a dead faint*

Comments

[tigerlily625.livejournal.com]

you know, i would get an AA saying that jublie3 updated, and then i'd get all excited and click on it only to have some crazy pansy story. ::smacks forehead::

lol. i only jest. :) i'm sure the story is simply fantabulous. i, on the other hand, am reading jane eyre b/c i have a quiz on ch. 7-12 today. whoop. :\ lol.

but at least this means OA will be along eventually. right? right????

[starvinbohemian.livejournal.com]

*Smacks forehead*

[anotherdreamer5.livejournal.com]

YAY! YAY! YAY! YAY! YAY! YAY! YAY! YAY! YAY!

Calming down. Not raelly. I have freaking class right now. WHY?! YAY FOR FE4! YAY FOR YOU NOT LEAVING YOUR COMPUTER! Frick for me having to go to class. I WILL read it.

Yay for you updating!

Miranda

[anotherdreamer5.livejournal.com]

And I'm back because that was freaking AWESOME. All of it. It so funny to see Snape's character through the Slytherin eyes because we know tha the's got to be secretly working to "save" Pansy and she super doesn't see that in him at all. I love that. I love that she is so utterly a Slytherin. I love that she and Blaise, together, are amazing. I keep worrying that she's going to fall from grace, but I adore that her entire house flocked around her. That was a really great detail. I love how much they all fight with one another. Great job. Honestly. Yay for YOU.

[starvinbohemian.livejournal.com]

LOL!! You're so funny. ;)

[go-aggies04.livejournal.com]

only 32 pages?? but huzzah for finishing! I can read it when I'm done with my English paper, stupid Shakespeare class... grumble grumble...

[starvinbohemian.livejournal.com]

Yes, only 32. My average these days is up in the fourties. *Smacks forehead* Why can't I do short?

[kneazle.livejournal.com]

aww! *hugs* poor baby!

I wondered, my friend is going to see Rilo Kiley in concert here in May, but what type of music is s/he?

[starvinbohemian.livejournal.com]

Hmn. Emo alternative? Lol. But everything is alternative these days. ;)

She's kind of like Jewel, actually. You know, before the whole sell-out bit. ;)

[kneazle.livejournal.com]

HAHah. Excellent.

I think I'll check her songs out then... :P

[go-aggies04.livejournal.com]

Well, I told you I would try to review on the site, but like I predicted- it wouldn't let me. Soooo, even though I called earlier I will write a review for you here, hopefully without giving away the plot for others who haven't read it yet *remembers the Shala deboucle*.

Well, I can't say I'm not frusterated with Pansy. If I were her, I would give Draco the heave-ho and let him lift whatever skirts he pleases as long as he didn't damage the chain of command in Slytherin. Blaise on the other hand is a FRIGHTENING little woman! She's one of those people you see and think "dear God let her not look at me" because she's so evil. hopefully this was the point, at some point I think she'll probably do something drastic, yet calculated and then it'll all go to hell. Lets see... I loved the writting style as usual, everyone has remained pretty constant as far as personalities but the Chinese girl came out of nowhere, is your room mate in this chapter? Or maybe you can make the Chinses girl insane and she can be my room mate! but only if she meets a rather sticky end. I liked the part in the art club where .... explodes at Pansy because of the death of those ministry people, very glad you didn't make them all "fairy tale happy to see her" that would have been disapointing. Interesting cliff hanger on the Patil front, what's Draco going to do to that poor girl? Honostly I would have done the same thing, who does he think he is? He just got Pansy to talk to him again and he makes a move on a girl 10 feet away! Haven't these people heard of STD's??? well, I supose there's a magical remedy for that anyway. Wait, were was I? oh yes, last note- very good that Pansy's 'group' stuck with her, although it was a bit surprising that Blaise would acctually look at a first year.

That's it! Good job and I look forward to the next chapter of OA!

[starvinbohemian.livejournal.com]

Lol! Poor Shala. ;)

Ick. Why would I want my roommate in my fan fic? *Shudders* No. Su Li is actually mentioned as a Ravenclaw on the hp-lexicon. All it says, however, is that she's in Pansy's year. I looked up the origins of Li and came to the conclusion that she was Chinese.

Hehe. Come on. It's Draco! How can you not love him? ;D

*Snickers about STDs*

They weren't first years, actually. More like fifth years. Lol. She wouldn't look at first years. Would you, if they were eleven, and you were seventeen?

Also, in regards to our conversation about Pansy's bitchiness in the last chapter, she basically spent the entire chappie with her spikes out. The third chapter basically screwed her, so she's on the complete defensive on several fronts. Understandable, yeah? ;D

[frigginspaz.livejournal.com]

I'm so tempted to click the link... but I'm in math class right now... ARGH!!! And I'm sort of grounded from the computer... so I don't know when I'll be able to get to it! NOOOO!

[starvinbohemian.livejournal.com]

LOL!!!

How are you going to survive without your computer? ;D

[frigginspaz.livejournal.com]

Honestly, I don't know.

Class ends in 24 minutes... ARRRRRRRRRRGHHHH!!! What does the k value do the graph? Shifts it up and down, of course. I so knew that. OMG I HATE ALGEBRA.

/end spaz

[glassxhouses.livejournal.com]

OHHHHHH MY GOD

[starvinbohemian.livejournal.com]

Lol! I'll take that positively, I think. ;)

[arisingstarlet.livejournal.com]

yay i finally get to read something that my kellie has written. damn you because now that you have gotten me sucked into this fan fic thing i have started to fall behind in my classes. instead of dinosaurs i read about harry and draco doing naughty things to each other. * takes a moment* and instead of film studies i have to read your fic. maybe i can resist the temptation through i doubt it.

[starvinbohemian.livejournal.com]

LOL!!! Welcome to my life. ;D My grades during high school took a downward spiral because of fan fic. Who wants to study when you can read about Harry and Draco getting it on? No one sane. ;D

But you don't want to read this one. One, it's only PG-13. Two, it's incomplete.

[arisingstarlet.livejournal.com]

whatever im reading it! i dont care if half of it is about horrible snakes eating the liberals at hogwarts i will still read it because i want to read something you wrote. i have to like your writting style if im going to let you write that book about me later.

[starvinbohemian.livejournal.com]

*Rolls over laughing*

Now, that is a fan fic idea! ;D

LOL!!! Oh, indeed, you should like my style if I am to be your ghost-writer. Captial, old chap. ;D